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hate.. by InsanitylittleRed hate.. by InsanitylittleRed
Phew! .. was thinking not have time to finish today 8D

with love for Nico :iconsixpathoffriendship:

"What if...

you lived behind a mirror

a reflection that only they see

and a reflection that only could hurt

to hate ones-self

that would be discrete

to hate a part of you

many would ask what I mean

how would you feel

if you couldn't look upon true beauty

and windows to ones soul

allowed no one to see the true thee

yet reflected fear and sorrow

and all emotion s barrowed

from the past

that at first glance

that all said wouldn't last



what if...

you could never make friends

that every chance for a new beginning

was only the brink of the end

the mocking hysterical

with nothing but the ridicule

blastphamus words

and others that called you a fool

reminding you of the truth

that you simply try to flee

but knowing that you will be alone

as long as you have eyes like these

that judge you before anyone else

and leave no room for love

that cut through the very soul

that leave others cowering

before they're done



what if...

I could remove these thorns

so no once else would have to fear

in turn save my sanity

before true discord draws near

for in the end

anything would be better

then their whispers and

their laughs

being blind

I could weather

even if I must do it by my hands

so with what if's a side

and you all knowing my fate

no remorse as I say goodbye

and welcome darkness's embrace."(с) :iconsithwolf:
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:iconseiya-meteorite:
Seiya-Meteorite Featured By Owner May 13, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
Don't succumb to your hate!
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
You hate your eyes? Why? They're fine. Just fine. :-| *pats her head*
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:iconrainbowdash420:
RainbowDash420 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
omfg
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:iconreyjjj:
ReyJJJ Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The time has come, and so have I.
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StoneHot316 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Cool! :3
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:iconinsanitylittlered:
InsanitylittleRed Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
thank you :D
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:iconmagazineontheedge:
magazineontheedge Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
Que bonita!!!*^*
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:iconinsanitylittlered:
InsanitylittleRed Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
Inekoitplz 
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:iconajax94:
Ajax94 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
Awesome job bro! =P
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:iconinsanitylittlered:
InsanitylittleRed Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
thank you хЗ
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:iconajax94:
Ajax94 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
Welcome! :meow:~:heart:
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:iconfusionofsoulsrainbow:
Safesleep!!!!!! GET UP!!!! PLEASE!!! GET UP!!!! Don't GIve up!!!!! think of all your friends who support you, think about all of them! do not give up! TATAKAE!!!!



Amazing art.:3
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:iconinsanitylittlered:
InsanitylittleRed Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
she will not give up. never!- FIRERAGE -
 
thank youEmoji32
 

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:iconfusionofsoulsrainbow:
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!I'm on fire! 

Welcome!:hug:
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VipeyDashie Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
That's what i'm talking about!
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:iconfusionofsoulsrainbow:
Yeah! D:
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XLUFERX Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that pose remember me when eren was stuck in that collapsed building
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:iconinsanitylittlered:
InsanitylittleRed Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
Hmm ... come to think maybe there is something in common:yum:
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sithwolf Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

 

What if...

 you lived behind a mirror

a reflection that only they see

and a reflection that only could hurt

to hate ones-self

that would be discrete

to hate a part of you

many would ask what I mean

how would you feel

if you couldn't look upon true beauty

and windows to ones soul

allowed no one to see the true thee

yet reflected fear and sorrow

and all emotion s barrowed

from the past

that at first glance

that all said wouldn't last

 

what if...

you could never make friends

that every chance for a new beginning

was only the brink of the end

the mocking hysterical

with nothing but the ridicule

blastphamus words

and others that called you a fool

reminding you of the truth

that you simply try to flee

but knowing that you will be alone

as long as you have eyes like these

that judge you before anyone else

and leave no room for love

that cut through the very soul

that leave others cowering

before they're done

 

what if...

I could remove these thorns

so no once else would have to fear

in turn save my sanity

before true discord draws near

for in the end 

anything would be better  

then their whispers and

their laughs

being blind

I could weather

even if I must do it by my hands

so with what if's a side

and you all knowing my fate

no remorse as I say goodbye

and welcome darkness's embrace.

 

i'm so sorry it's long and stupid and I don't know the exact reason why this pony hates their eyes but I just went and wrote any way  thanks for the inspiration as always and do with this as you please.

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InsanitylittleRed Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
but what's wrong with a long verse?:yum: I liked it very much. besides, I have poor eyesight .. and .. I can read it knowing its meaning lol
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sithwolf Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yay i'm glad you both like my poetry
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:iconviktore2:
Viktore2 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
Thats when its time for an eye surgery.
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:iconinsanitylittlered:
InsanitylittleRed Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
a good option:yum:
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sixpathsoffriendship Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh mY......GOD.:O

This is just....Perfect!!!! ;-; i know...is sad...but she only wants to be a normal mare...and she hates her eyes for that reason.:(

ANYWAys!!!!!

Thankyou so so somuch!!!!!!!!!:love: You are the most KInd and awesome friend i have!!!!:heart: I love you so much!!! thankyou!!!
:hug:2 rvmp :hug:2 rvmp 
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InsanitylittleRed Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
I thought you did not like it, thank God it is not so .. I'm just in a hurry so the lines are very sloppy ..8D
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sixpathsoffriendship Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is just too awesome! the face reminds me Eren!X3 you are so epic artist!:hug:
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:iconinsanitylittlered:
InsanitylittleRed Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
Damn, I had to make sure that her face looked like Reiner, Nico likes of Reiner!D:
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:iconsixpathsoffriendship:
sixpathsoffriendship Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But is Beautiful!*^*:heart: i so luv it!:heart:
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:iconinsanitylittlered:
InsanitylittleRed Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
but ... Reiner .. Nico ..8c
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sixpathsoffriendship Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Y..You want to make him as Titan? O.e!!! 

OMG!!!!o.o
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ZeroZi Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
why
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:iconinsanitylittlered:
InsanitylittleRed Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
I do not know :D
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:iconrosalliebroken:
RosallieBroken Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist
What does that mean ._. Why? Did this pony saw somethin' terrible?
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:iconinsanitylittlered:
InsanitylittleRed Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
it is a philosophical phrase!8D haha, just kidding. for each may be different meanings
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